Writer of the Week is back by popular demand!
This week’s task is simple. Your writing can be any style; newspaper report, story extract, script, anything! As long as it is about the picture posted with this blog.
However there are some rules. You are not allowed to use the word… THE!
This is much harder than it sounds! Try to earn the Writer of the Week award by using as many amazing writing features as you can!
Good luck!
Hi I’m Abbie and I absolutely love music!
Today I’m going to take a stroll through a beautiful forest to school. I’m going on my own and I’ve never been this way before but today I want to,so I’m going to go and get washed;dressed and,brush my hair.
15 mins later.
Of I set avoiding any of these blackberrys because I’m allergic to it. By surprise! I find a 3 eyed monster hidding behind a rough,bumpy;brown tree. “Helloo” it says.I say “hello” back it was actully it was quite nice then it said here come on my back I’ll take you to school! Minutes later, I reached school. My friends was amazed by what they saw. That day was so great!
Fantastic Abbie! Some good conjunctions used here. I wonder what the monster would do if it actually came to Woodfield! What would it have for it’s lunch? 2GTs
Suddenly, a colossal,hideous monster emerged from a black shadow of a tree and stood right before my eyes. I thought I was dreaming so I pinched myself, but it was real ,my mind was asking so many questions like how can IT be real ? what if there is OTHERS?
Wow, I really like this extract Sophie! I’m really intrigued to find out if there are any others! 2GTs!
I was walking down a strange a strange monster leaped out at me from a huge bushy tree. As soon as I was trying to say hello to it another monster jumped out at me but this time it came out from behind a bush waving its leafy arms at me. Oh no what if there are more of them!
Excellent Lottie! I wonder how You felt when the second one jumped out at you! 2GTs
In a sluchy wood there were dark green trees that looked fed up, it wasn’t a good time to go to a forest but Gilbert had no choice. He had to catch his lunch, a tasty one! “Shall I catch a deer or a hare?” pondered Gilbert, “or a scrumptious, young girl……”
Wow Eve! I don’t think I would have liked to be in Gilbert’s shoes at that moment! 2GTs
On a beautiful, warm Autumns day I decided to go on a stroll . As I scurried around, I thought about looking for some chestnut brown acorns. But, as I lurked behind a tree to get one I saw a shadow.
” What is that?” I questioned as I heard a rustling sound. I took a deep breath and ran to a tree.
“Who is there?”I yelled ” I’m not afraid!”
Suddenly an enormous, monstrous, three-eyed monster came up to me.
WHAT!?!?
You’ve used a great range of vocabulary Nithu. I wonder what happened once you had met the monster! 1GT