Fantastic homework last week everyone! For this week’s challenge, your writing MUST be 100 words, no more or no less. You can write about anything you like, in any genre you like, but it has to be 100 words long! Try to use as many writing features as you can.
Well done to Harris for winning this week’s writer or the week award, his idea will go to our Angry Words display too!
Mr Lyons
One scorching hot day, a despicable, ugly witch was on a quest to find the glorious kingdom of terrabithia. Where the trees were bright blue and the grass was purple but not just any purple a purple with power. It grew and grew and grew until it caused a tragic disease and would harm all children! The kingdom was already bad enough . And the witch was determind to find terrabithia so she could make the grass grow even more! So she went on a journey.She loathed children! Do you like children? Also she has children! What will happen next?
The world was silent. Only the faint, flickering sound of bells could be heard in the dark, damp night sky. Children slept like newborn babies in their beds, parents exhausted drifted into a deep sleep. Suddenly, a loud crash on the rooftop! A rainfall of hooves crashed and clattered onto slates and tiles. A ginormous man carrying heavy sacks looked a funny sight as he forced himself into every chimney of every house in every land. Filling his huge jelly belly with mince pies and milk, his eyes twinkled brightly chuckling, ” Merry Christmas to all and to all good night”.
The last couple of days, I have had a naughty elf has been doing naughty things like the first tuesday we had him he had eaten my brothers sweets and the next morning he had a letter from Santa made of cheerios and it said Santa say’s Hi and on thursday he was playing twister with all the teddies he is to naughty The next day he had a tea party on Saturday he shared our sweets out and gave all the tang fastics to my dad It was funny and he had a sleep over with the teddies because we had one at our Nana and grandads.
I love yours McCauley!
I like going horse riding at the weekend. My favourite horse is called Justin because he listens to me and canters, walks and trots when I want him to. I enjoy doing small jumps on my horse and playing a game called all around the world. Last year I did a three day course in which I spent three days with a horse called Chester. We had to catch our horse in the field, then groom it and feed it. We had riding lessons and lectures. At the end we took part in a gymkhana and I received three rosettes.
It was, about 12 o’clock, close midnight
I saw a spark of light in the black sky, it lit up the sky like a shooting star but if you blinked you would miss it
You could see the multicolored lights on the particularly special day
When you wake all you see is dust
I think it helps ‘paint’ the sky
Boasting to the moon and the stars showing how special it is
When I look up to the sky thinking ‘wow!’
It shoots to the sky and doesn’t come down
Try and guess what it is ?
Well it is a firework!
yours is very good nithu!
It was dark. Pitch black. The only light was a faded candle in the distance. Hesitantly she stepped forward, the floorboards creaked. All of a sudden, a door slowly opened. Cautiously she stepped forward, unaware of what was about to happen. As she walked in a blast of light got to her. It was blinding. Really weird.Suddenly someone grabbed her by her collar. Their nails were piercing like a sharp spike. They dug in to her neck drawing out blood. It was like a horror movie. Super creepy. She was dragged into the room unknown of what might happen.
yours is myseryous
Our great George, who has recently been ill and still is, is starting to get really excited for christmas this year. Also he has been to the vets 3 times in the space of one weekend !! George is as black as the midnight sky with his white patches as stars. He is now curled up to the green, comfy sofa with his pointy,black ears poking up. Our vet is called Luc Van Dijick. George is very hesitant to what he does and apparently he has been in a fight. He also was breathing heavily and we had to go to luc.
I stared at the little fairy as she fluttered gracefully around my room. Suddenly, the fairy flew to my ear and whispered “Hello, my name’s Tilly, can you help me?” I nodded to say yes but, before I could ask her what she needed, she had soared down stairs.
”What is this?” she asked, looking at the christmas tree. ”It’s a christmas tree.” I answered . “Oh,” she sighed, “this would be the perfect place to live!” Suddenly I had a brainwave, “Would you like to stay with me?” She nodded and I put her on the top of the tree.
I like your idea Jessica
On 21 November 1872 Wigan Football Club was founded by members of Wigan Cricket Club at a meeting in the Royal Hotel, Standishgate. Wigan F.C. played on Folly Field, near Upper Dicconson Street. A practice match took place on 30 November at Folly Field. After a series of trial matches, the team travelled to Warrington to play its first competitive match on 18 January 1873. The game ended in a draw. The club played in blue and white hooped jerseys before changing in 1886 to cherry and white hoops. Their most famous ground was Central park, now a Tesco store.
It was Christmas Eve I was curled up in my cosy warm bed and I was as snug as a bug in a rug! I could hear loud chimes from the church so I looked out of my bedroom window and I saw glittery white snow. I could see Santa coming with his raindears then I heard the slay bells. I slowly tiptoed down the creaky old stairs in the hope I would see Santa, I saw him eating the mince pie and drinking the milk. I could smell the mince pies that the factory were making they smelt delicious .
A Commentary
Well, the second half is underway after a very one- sided 1st half here at Woodfield Way . Hopefully the manager will have had a word with the team, the teachers have enjoyed too much possession.
WOW! I’m flummoxed, what a mistake by the goalkeeper – 2-1. Oooh that’s a bad one, the ref has gone for a red and a penalty, which is slotted in the bottom corner -2-2. There are thirty seconds left. the children are on the attack! Hang on. . . Ethan has gone for an over head kick. Perfect execution! HE SCORES -THE CROWD GOES WILD! The children have won the trophy!
Well it’s nearly Christmas and I am so exited. I have been a very good girl so I hope that Father Christmas brings me everything on my list that I have sent him in a letter to the North Pole. It may snow just in time for christmas. That would be brilliant, i would make a snowman with my big sister Paige and we would make snow angels in the snow. We would even have a snow ball fight. That would make it the best christmas ever in the world. All my presents I asked for and a white christmas.
A couple of years ago when we were on holiday in the South of France, we stayed in a caravan with Eurocamp. One evening we went in the car to Cogolin for the evening for a drink and something to eat. Suddenly my Mum stepped out of the car and some bird poo landed on her foot. My Mum thought it was a pine needle dropping on her foot. We all laughed our heads off that evening! We all remember the bird poo incident in the South of France. It will stay in our minds forever and ever.
That’s going to be hard!
I woke up.”arrrgh” I screeched “where am I ?” I asked mum. we had ended up on a tropical island in nowhere. Me and mum plodded outside on the ticklish rough sand. Stressed, hot and sticky we both wandered round looking for a nice ice cold drink of water. of course something to eat too!
After two hours that felt like a billion hours a boat , well not just any old boat came to rescue us and that was a rescue boat! The people were coming to save us. Finally we got some delicious food and drink to have!
Well done McCauley for winning the writter of the week!