Your homework this weekend is quite difficult! People who use Twitter, like our school Twitter account, can only ever use 140 characters per tweet, so they have to be very precise in their writing. Your ‘tweet’ needs to tell everyone who your hero is and as much about them as you can in just in 140 characters. It is a lot harder than it seems! In your tweet you must include:
1. A comma
2. An adverb
3. An apostrophe for possession
Remember – spaces and punctuation marks count as characters.
Here is an example of my tweet about my hero:
‘Sean O’loughlin. He is Wigan’s captain. He is immensely strong, a leader .He always tries his best and never gives in. He’s born winner.’
I’m looking forward to your tweets. Remember, I wonder who will be the first person to take home our Writer of the week trophy?
Mr Lyons
Evie is evil queen’s daughter.She is from disny descendants.She always makes clothes for her best friend mal.Evie is a very good princes.’
Good use of a possessive apostrophe!
Ellie Simmonds is tremendously determined, confident and hard working. Ellie’s disability has not stopped her being a successful swimmer.
Well done Rebecca, you managed to use all 3 of the features! 1GT!
My Dad. Mont Blanc’s 100 mile finisher! He sets himself trail running goals and achieves them. He is intent, strong and fit. He a champion!
Wow, that sounds like hard work!
Hunder wasser`s paintings are amazing for insperation on some of his paintings he gently goes over in a pencil.
lots of his paintings are red,pink.
Great use of all the features you were challenged to use Abbie! 1GT
DanTDM. He is a youtuber. He goes on Minecraft adventures with his villager friend Trayaurus. He makes me laugh a lot.
He sounds like fun, Eve!
My Dad slowly rises at 5am, choosing one of his suit’s to wear, to travel to work in Wolverhampton. Yet still has energy to play wrestling!
That’s certainly something to aspire to be like Eve!
My dad is an extraordinarily great doctor. He is a bowel surgeon, so he saves lots of lives. He’s also a great dad and he is my hero.
Great adverb Nithu! 1GT
Harry Styles, ‘he is a great singer’
He always does his best! he always looks smart , and tidy. If he wasn’t a pop star, if he wasn’t good at singing, then I wouldn’t be here today!
Good effort Katie. Although I’m not sure if I agree that Harry looks smart, when I see him on TV he always looks as scruffy as the Gruffalo!
Martin Luther King:inspirational human rights activist, sadly killed for his beliefs. MLK’s belief was equality despite colour of skin.
MLK is a great hero to have Ethan. Great tweet. 1GT!
My Mum, shes a strong person. I’d say ‘she’s a great runner!’ runs our house & runs for fun. Works hard, and always has time to make us laugh & smile.
It sounds like your mum does a lot for you Erin!
My mum.She is always there for the people she loves .She is kind, bubbly and friendly and my mum’s friendliness will never run out
That’s something to aspire to be like Sophie!
My hero is Taylor Swift. She is very confident and a great singer. My favourite song by her is wildest dreams. It is a really nice song.
A great tweet Lottie!
Squid he is a YouTube he does all different video’s such as mine craft . he is super funny and exciting . squid is really fantastic.
You got lots of description into your tweet McCauley!
‘Owen Farrell’. He’s a really good rugby player. I think he’s one of the best players in the world. He kicks brilliantly for England.
Great tweet Harris! 1GT
My mum works really hard and has taken me on lots of adventures to exciting places in the world. She’s a good organiser and plans the trips herself.
You’re very lucky Ben!
“Slammin’”Sam Burgess he is one of the best rugby league players in the world. He always leads by example, is one of the toughest, hardest players ever.
Great tweet Matthew! Good effort at using inverted commas too! 1GT
My Hero is Nadia Comaneci , she is a gymnast. She is as quick as a lightning bolt on the vault.
Good use of a simile James!
Lionel Messi is simply the best footballer on the planet, he has won the golden boot 3 times. Messi’s first game for Barcelona was in 2004.
“Sarah” my coach is my hero because she is very funny wen we play tennis and I see her on Wednesday and Friday. and I wish to be like her wen I grow up.
Anthony martial is a confident,brave and has an AMAZING
talent at football!It has never stopped him scoreing goals and helping out Manchester United.
My hero is my uncle. He is an incredibly brave, hard working police man. He’s a Chief Inspector and his team’s job is to keep us safe.