MY HERO

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Your homework this weekend is quite difficult! People who use Twitter, like our school Twitter account, can only ever use 140 characters per tweet, so they have to be very precise in their writing.  Your ‘tweet’ needs to tell everyone who your hero is and as much about them as you can in just in 140 characters. It is a lot harder than it seems! In your tweet you must include:

1. A comma

2. An adverb

3. An apostrophe for possession

Remember – spaces and punctuation marks count  as characters.

Here is an example of my tweet about my hero:

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‘Sean O’loughlin. He is Wigan’s captain. He is immensely strong, a leader .He always tries his best and never gives in. He’s born winner.’

I’m looking forward to your tweets. Remember, I wonder who will be the first person to take home our Writer of the week trophy?

Mr Lyons

38 thoughts on “MY HERO”

  1. Evie is evil queen’s daughter.She is from disny descendants.She always makes clothes for her best friend mal.Evie is a very good princes.’

  2. Ellie Simmonds is tremendously determined, confident and hard working. Ellie’s disability has not stopped her being a successful swimmer.

  3. My Dad. Mont Blanc’s 100 mile finisher! He sets himself trail running goals and achieves them. He is intent, strong and fit. He a champion!

  4. Hunder wasser`s paintings are amazing for insperation on some of his paintings he gently goes over in a pencil.
    lots of his paintings are red,pink.

  5. My Dad slowly rises at 5am, choosing one of his suit’s to wear, to travel to work in Wolverhampton. Yet still has energy to play wrestling!

  6. My dad is an extraordinarily great doctor. He is a bowel surgeon, so he saves lots of lives. He’s also a great dad and he is my hero.

  7. Harry Styles, ‘he is a great singer’
    He always does his best! he always looks smart , and tidy. If he wasn’t a pop star, if he wasn’t good at singing, then I wouldn’t be here today!

    1. Good effort Katie. Although I’m not sure if I agree that Harry looks smart, when I see him on TV he always looks as scruffy as the Gruffalo!

  8. Martin Luther King:inspirational human rights activist, sadly killed for his beliefs. MLK’s belief was equality despite colour of skin.

  9. My Mum, shes a strong person. I’d say ‘she’s a great runner!’ runs our house & runs for fun. Works hard, and always has time to make us laugh & smile.

  10. My mum.She is always there for the people she loves .She is kind, bubbly and friendly and my mum’s friendliness will never run out

  11. Squid he is a YouTube he does all different video’s such as mine craft . he is super funny and exciting . squid is really fantastic.

  12. ‘Owen Farrell’. He’s a really good rugby player. I think he’s one of the best players in the world. He kicks brilliantly for England.

  13. My mum works really hard and has taken me on lots of adventures to exciting places in the world. She’s a good organiser and plans the trips herself.

  14. “Slammin’”Sam Burgess he is one of the best rugby league players in the world. He always leads by example, is one of the toughest, hardest players ever.

  15. Lionel Messi is simply the best footballer on the planet, he has won the golden boot 3 times. Messi’s first game for Barcelona was in 2004.

  16. “Sarah” my coach is my hero because she is very funny wen we play tennis and I see her on Wednesday and Friday. and I wish to be like her wen I grow up.

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