Your homework this weekend, is to use direct speech to write what you think the people are talking about in the picture as part of a story. What could they be up to? It’s your challenge to bring the picture to life!
I’m looking forward to the huge range of ideas we get! Remember to use inverted commas and remember… the word ‘said’ is banned!
Good luck!
Mr Lyons
“What detective work shall we do today?” Asked Mr Camebridge. “I know, we shall go round town and ask the people of town if there is any mystories to solve.” Replied Mr Sand. “Good idea, yes good idea.” Repeated Mr Camebridge and they set of to find some mystories to solve together…
Great use of synonyms!
The man in the spy glasses , who was talking to diy spy , was just going to set of for a mission.
People in the park was wondering what they was talking about!
BUT I know what they was talking about. Hi I am spy 12 the one in the spy glasses I’ll call John and the other is DIY spy.
There wondering who has stolen the diamond ring that was hidden in a bush in London. Its the queen’s!
In about an hours time John is keeping the queen safe. And DIY spy is going round the city of London asking “have you ever seen this diamond ring?”
Good effort Abbie.
” Tunnocks Caramel wafer are my favourite biscuits!” whispered Mr Sspecklesman,wearing his dark sunglasses. ” Mine are Oeo’s , best biscuit in the world,” replied Mr Lamanda. ” Lets get down to business ” , spoke Mr Sspecklesman in a deep voice . ” I need the £5,000 out of your briefcase and the keys to the black Harley Davidson .
Interesting ideas Eve, who doesn’t love Tunnocks caramel wafers? They’re the best!
“Have you brought the money?” the man with the brown, tatty hat asked nervously. You will get the money when I have finished my drink” replied Tom confidently. Apprehensively the man in the hat asked again, “It’s time now to swop the briefcases, I need my money now!” Tom, looking ahead began to get annoyed. In a scary voice he whispered,” Wait, you must wait or you will not like what I do next………”
Great narrative Hana. Good use of adverbs in there too!
“Have you got the suitcase from Mr logan ” Asked Detective James.
“Yes. Have you heard Doctor M has escaped from prison again!” Whispered Agent Grey. “We have got to capture him before his machine is done, and the public knows. Luckily the only source of fuel is in this suitcase so get this to the laboratory fast.”
“Yes Agent Grey, I wont let you down!” Detective James determinedly replied.
Great use of adverbs Nithu, I want to know why the public can’t know about what’s in the case!
“Hi my names Bond , James Bond!” bellowed the old man in disguise.( 007)
“Hey Bond.” Didn’t recognise you with that AMAZING disguise! replied M. “We’ll go to the bar after!” “I’ll order my favourite (martini shaken not stirred!)
“Do you think Money Penny will join us?” Asked M.
“Well , if she doesn’t then that means more for me!”
Some good ideas Katie!
Two suspicious men were sitting on a bench, talking about a
super secret mission.”Right, did you remember what Mr.Rooney
Said?” Asked agent 2.”Yes he said sneak into the old building
over there and see if we can find any clues.” Replied agent 1.
“Good,at least you remember that!” Laughed agent 2.
As the two men walked into the building apprehensively,they mysteriously didn’t find any clues about a ghost which was supposed to be there mission. The ghost was belevied to be a lady in white,but wasn’t scary in any way. So she ran away into the oldest,darkest house in the street. If they didn’t find any clues by the end of the day,they would no longer be super secret
Spy’s…
Good use of alliteration Hannah! And a former word of the week!
“Hello Agent X nice to see you again, have you got the gadget for my mission ?” “Yes l have, but be quiet you don’t know who could be listening .” “Good, I have all of the money the £50, 000 .” Stated Agent Z “I have the night vision goggles and the super duper 100.” whispered Agent X “what about the pen?”questioned Agent Z “That too, Agent Z when we get up we will swap our brief cases around and walk in different directions.” “See you in another 300 years,” replied Agent X.
Good dialogue Rebecca, I wonder how they can live for 300 years! Are they aliens?
The spy wearing the fedora sat on the bench on wondering if the man in the black blazer had the spy kit and drill to get into the Queen’s parliament to steal the crown jewels ?
The man in the black blazer was wondering if the man in the fedora has his money for the spy kit and the drill he whispered ” do you have my money?”
” do you have the spy kit and drill?” Asked the other. ” yes I do have your things.”
“Let’s do a deal”……
Great effort Sol, well done!
“Hi i am kc, thats detective kc to you” whispered the man in the dark glasses.
“Good afternoon sir. What is our secret mission for today”? Agent Sidelines replied in a deep voice.
“Well agent Sidelines I need to know first if you have the fake Diamonds in your briefcase” Asked kc.
“Yes sir I have” replied agent Sidelines.
“Well I have got 1million in fake cash in my briefcase here, so lets go and catch that criminal Doctor Claws” laughed kc in a revengeful voice.
“Yeah lets go and nail him into thinking we are criminals too when really we have fooled him and he has fallen straight into our trap”
replied Sidelines happily.
Great use of adverbs Scarlett!
Thank you!
“What shall we steal today?”asked Monsieur Mongure. “I think we should rob £100000 from the mayor”answered Mr Brown.”I thought we could burgle the Queen!” exclaimed Monsieur Mongure “and get £10000000000000000000000000000 off her!”answered Monsieur Mongure”Now I’m a bit hungry so I want a chocolate bar and a …
“pst,pst, what’s on the sandwiches?”
“Never you mind”
“I see you have the briefcase, does it have the money in?”
“Yes,I see you have brought your briefcase,does it contain the photographs and documents?”
“Yes sir”
“Slide your case towards me with your leg, I will stand up and walk away with it and you can take mine when you are ready to leave.”
“No one must EVER know of this meeting, the next we meet will be in St Helens, be prepared”
“I will be sir, by the way you look silly in that hat and sunglassses”
Good effort Matthew, but it would be good to know who is saying what!
The two spy’s were sat on the old wooden park bench contemplating their next move . “When will you finish your lunch?” asked the spy in disguise . “Don’t rush me I am thinking of the best way to catch the criminals, we know they always target jewellers shops in the area every 6 months on a Tuesday morning,” shouted the man in the clean smart suit.
Great effort Ben, I hope they would catch the criminals!
“What shall we steal today?”asked Monsieur Mongure. “I think we should rob £100000 from the mayor”answered Mr Brown”. I thought we could burgle the Queen!” exclaimed Monsieur Mongure “and get £1000000 off her!”answered Monsieur Mongure”. ,
They seem to have some very bold ideas!
“What do you want me to do with the briefcase?”asked Dr Dissco
“What do you think? It is highly explosive. We don’t want anyone from the other side getting their sticky fingers all over it do we?”
“I am guessing you want me to put it in the you know where!”exclaimed Dr Dissco ,who was now winking to agent
Binks
“Meet me at the ‘Bunny Hop Pub’ tonight at six sharp otherwise you will fail your most important mission of the year and if you do that you will not be doing another mission again!”raved agent Binks.
It sounds like Dr Dissco isn’t a very good agent!
“Hey where is the money?”
“Here it is ”
“Nice work”
“I have got a million pound already”
Good use of inverted commas for speech McCauley. But who is saying what?
“Have you got what I asked?” Mr grey asked. “Yes.” whispered Mr coal. ”Give it to me then!” shouted Mr grey angrily. “Not so loud and not so fast! I need my money first! ” Mr coal muttered quietly. Quickly they swapped bags and then Mr coal ran away, thinking about all this money for something that wasn’t even valuable! Little did he know that he had swapped a lost masterpiece for a measly £50!
I’m sure Mr Coal would be devastated when he realised!
Well done for winning writer of the week!
well done for winning jessica!
Penny and Talon sat down on the bench and started talking about Inspector Gadget ,who is Penny’s Uncle, and Dr.Claw ,who is Talon’s Uncle,. “O.K so we have been through this before my uncle is better than yours”whisperd Penny. “No way,my uncle rocks he’s even got a claw”scoffed Talon. ” Even though he somtimes gets a bit annoying.” “My Uncle has gadgets like a cheese knife or better he has a jetpack”bragged Penny “NO WAY MY UNCLE IS BETTER BECAUSE HE TAKES OVER THE WORLD! weeeeelllll almost”shouted Talon “Isnt that evil?”asked Penny “OF COURSE IT IS HIS JOB”screeched Talon. “O.K lets stop this argument”whisperd Penny “O.K”awnserd Talon also whispering. “come on lets walk of and act naturally”awnserd back Penny and they both walked back to their Uncle’s Lair’s , HQ,s or homes.
Great use of a subordinate clause!
Agent Eve tiptoed over to the park bench where Agent Lottie was waiting for her. “OK, the Black Cat is on the run and she has stolen the gold Babybel so we have to find it.”she wispered.”OK.” replied Agent Lottie and they zoomed off into the night.
The Black Cat sounds like a very mysterious criminal!
Well done Eve that looks like a good detective story!
I agree James. You should let everyone know what happens in the rest of the story!
Yes you should!
Well done Jessica for winning writer of the week!