Comments on: THE CHALLENGE!

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Fri, 13 May 2016 12:47:16 +0000

You’ve used a great range of vocabulary Nithu. I wonder what happened once you had met the monster! 1GT

By: Nithu

Nithu — Sat, 07 May 2016 14:32:53 +0000

On a beautiful, warm Autumns day I decided to go on a stroll . As I scurried around, I thought about looking for some chestnut brown acorns. But, as I lurked behind a tree to get one I saw a shadow.
” What is that?” I questioned as I heard a rustling sound. I took a deep breath and ran to a tree.
“Who is there?”I yelled ” I’m not afraid!”
Suddenly an enormous, monstrous, three-eyed monster came up to me.

WHAT!?!?

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Mon, 02 May 2016 19:21:19 +0000

Wow Eve! I don’t think I would have liked to be in Gilbert’s shoes at that moment! 2GTs

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Mon, 02 May 2016 19:20:22 +0000

Excellent Lottie! I wonder how You felt when the second one jumped out at you! 2GTs

By: Eve Lawton

Eve Lawton — Mon, 02 May 2016 18:57:25 +0000

In a sluchy wood there were dark green trees that looked fed up, it wasn’t a good time to go to a forest but Gilbert had no choice. He had to catch his lunch, a tasty one! “Shall I catch a deer or a hare?” pondered Gilbert, “or a scrumptious, young girl……”

By: Lottie

Lottie — Mon, 02 May 2016 15:23:42 +0000

I was walking down a strange a strange monster leaped out at me from a huge bushy tree. As soon as I was trying to say hello to it another monster jumped out at me but this time it came out from behind a bush waving its leafy arms at me. Oh no what if there are more of them!

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Sat, 30 Apr 2016 18:22:41 +0000

Fantastic Abbie! Some good conjunctions used here. I wonder what the monster would do if it actually came to Woodfield! What would it have for it’s lunch? 2GTs

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Sat, 30 Apr 2016 18:19:45 +0000

Wow, I really like this extract Sophie! I’m really intrigued to find out if there are any others! 2GTs!

By: Sophie Garner

Sophie Garner — Sat, 30 Apr 2016 14:00:11 +0000

Suddenly, a colossal,hideous monster emerged from a black shadow of a tree and stood right before my eyes. I thought I was dreaming so I pinched myself, but it was real ,my mind was asking so many questions like how can IT be real ? what if there is OTHERS?

By: Abbie Potter Y5

Abbie Potter Y5 — Sat, 30 Apr 2016 10:34:21 +0000

Hi I’m Abbie and I absolutely love music!
Today I’m going to take a stroll through a beautiful forest to school. I’m going on my own and I’ve never been this way before but today I want to,so I’m going to go and get washed;dressed and,brush my hair.

15 mins later.

Of I set avoiding any of these blackberrys because I’m allergic to it. By surprise! I find a 3 eyed monster hidding behind a rough,bumpy;brown tree. “Helloo” it says.I say “hello” back it was actully it was quite nice then it said here come on my back I’ll take you to school! Minutes later, I reached school. My friends was amazed by what they saw. That day was so great!