Comments on: MONSTROUS WEEKEND!

By: Eve Ashley

Eve Ashley — Sun, 29 Nov 2015 18:58:49 +0000

I wonder what happened to him!

By: Eve Ashley

Eve Ashley — Sun, 29 Nov 2015 18:47:57 +0000

It’s not that he LIKES sitting in a bowl of cereal, he just makes
mistakes!

By: Abbie Y5

Abbie Y5 — Sat, 28 Nov 2015 20:22:58 +0000

Well done Ethan for winning writer of the week

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Fri, 27 Nov 2015 11:02:23 +0000

Good effort Scarlett, but I’d like to see you write in full sentences and paragraphs.

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Fri, 27 Nov 2015 11:00:54 +0000

He sounds like a very mischievous gremlin!

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Fri, 27 Nov 2015 10:59:50 +0000

Great diary entry Eve! Why did he like sitting in a bowl of cereal? That’s very strange!

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Fri, 27 Nov 2015 10:58:28 +0000

I wonder what you and the gremlin got up to when you had him on your own!

By: Mrs Lowe

Mrs Lowe — Thu, 26 Nov 2015 23:49:45 +0000

Well done Year 5! I really enjoyed reading your fantastic diary entries. What wonderful imaginations you have! Great use of subordinate clauses and time adverbials too. Keep it up!

By: Jessica fairhurst

Jessica fairhurst — Thu, 26 Nov 2015 16:09:36 +0000

“Oh no! It’s my turn to look after the class gremlin, “I whispered to Hana. “Remember last time when I had it?” she whispered back. “Jessica and Hana stop talking! ” shouted Mr Lyons as he carried on writing 12×5 on the board. “Ring ring!” the bell went for home time. “Jessica, it is your turn to look after the class gremlin. ”

My mum groaned, she doesn’t like animals, when she saw the horrible green gremlin. I agreed really but nobody else put their name down and I felt sorry for him. He shrugged his little bony shoulders and stuck his tongue out at my mum behind her back (I don’t think he was too keen on her either!) when I got home I looked for the gremlin but he had disappeared. Had he run away or had something more sinister taken place? We may never know!

By: Sophie Garner

Sophie Garner — Mon, 23 Nov 2015 18:58:53 +0000

It was just any ordinary day when I heard a knock at the door.Then suddenly out of know where came my mother claiming it was a little monster we were babysitting. Little did I know I was about to be in for a monstrous weekend…

The door opened, and in popped a cute, fluffy, green and minute gremlin.Shocked, surprised and a little bit scared I took a step back from the small, brown table, which only had three legs, to get further away from the small, green creature.
This is what we fot upnto at the weekend.
On saturday:
We woke up and got ready.Next we ate dinner at the Red Robin. After that we went to bed in our fluffy, blue duvets and snuggled up to our teddies and dreamt of what adventures we would have the next day.
On Sunday:First we got ready for the long day ahead.We then had to go to wigan to do some shopping for my mum.Later that day my mum finished her shopping and got in a taxi.The gremlin that we were babysitting ran into a shop and soon came out with a STOLEN NECKLACE!!!!!!! My heart was racing as the gremlin ran down the road and soon I found myself running after it! After a while of running we arrived in my home street .After that my mum took the necklace back and I was grounded for a whole month! I hope the gremlin can stay again because it was the BEST WEEKEND EVER!! I would love to babysit again sometime soon