Comments on: DISASTROUS DAY AT THE ZOO http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2015/10/16/disastrous-day-at-the-zoo/ Come and see what we've been learning! Wed, 21 Jun 2017 16:19:45 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=3.9.40 By: Abbie y5 http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2015/10/16/disastrous-day-at-the-zoo/#comment-495 Mon, 26 Oct 2015 07:41:22 +0000 http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/?p=210#comment-495 I think everyones story are Good!
Well done ben!

]]> By: Hannah Schofield http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2015/10/16/disastrous-day-at-the-zoo/#comment-478 Thu, 22 Oct 2015 22:06:13 +0000 http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/?p=210#comment-478 Well done Hana for winning the setting description! That must of been you lucky day!

]]> By: Hannah Schofield http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2015/10/16/disastrous-day-at-the-zoo/#comment-477 Thu, 22 Oct 2015 16:16:03 +0000 http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/?p=210#comment-477 Me to! My car is really hot when it is hot and sunny.

]]> By: Hannah Schofield http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2015/10/16/disastrous-day-at-the-zoo/#comment-476 Thu, 22 Oct 2015 16:11:40 +0000 http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/?p=210#comment-476 It was just a normal day at the zoo. “Well? What do you want to see next then Hannah?” Asked mum. “Can we go through the drive through please?” Replied Hannah. So off we went in the car to the drive through.

Finally we eventually arrived at our favourite animal! The Zebra!
But the zebra wasn’t any old zebra. This zebra was a little bit mischievous zebra… The Zebra walked over to the car and I forgot to put the window up! Suddenly, the zebra popped its head in the car and sneezed all over Hannah’s new clothes! Mum and dads face were as red as tomatoes. Hannah wondered what her punishment was…

]]> By: Sophie Garner http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2015/10/16/disastrous-day-at-the-zoo/#comment-475 Tue, 20 Oct 2015 07:20:42 +0000 http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/?p=210#comment-475 Very good opening Hana

]]> By: alisa http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2015/10/16/disastrous-day-at-the-zoo/#comment-474 Mon, 19 Oct 2015 16:45:19 +0000 http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/?p=210#comment-474 good story opening Scarlett I love it.

]]> By: Mr Lyons http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2015/10/16/disastrous-day-at-the-zoo/#comment-463 Mon, 19 Oct 2015 07:42:25 +0000 http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/?p=210#comment-463 Fantastic opening Joe!

]]> By: Mr Lyons http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2015/10/16/disastrous-day-at-the-zoo/#comment-462 Mon, 19 Oct 2015 07:39:39 +0000 http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/?p=210#comment-462 Great opening Matthew! It sounds like a bad day already!

]]> By: Mr Lyons http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2015/10/16/disastrous-day-at-the-zoo/#comment-461 Mon, 19 Oct 2015 07:37:44 +0000 http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/?p=210#comment-461 I really like the last sentence of your opening Will! Well done!

]]> By: Mr Lyons http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2015/10/16/disastrous-day-at-the-zoo/#comment-460 Mon, 19 Oct 2015 07:37:20 +0000 http://cohort2010.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/?p=210#comment-460 Some good ideas in your story opening Alisa!

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