Comments on: SPOOKY SETTING DESCRIPTIONS!

By: Jessica fairhurst

Jessica fairhurst — Sun, 18 Oct 2015 12:44:14 +0000

well done Hana for winning.

By: Imogen Bradshaw

Imogen Bradshaw — Thu, 15 Oct 2015 16:17:41 +0000

As I pass the abandoned, wrecked house, I could see the long, flashing lightning strikes, and I can see the very top light flickering. As well as that I can hear lots of brown, scary owls hooting up in the high, rough trees, and I can hear the gate screaming at me. I can feel the rough, brown trees scratching me with there long, pointy fingers. The trees are as dull as a scull. As well I can feel the hard, mouldy floor. I can smell rotten dirty rats with fangs, and the air smells as horrible as a out of date eggs ROTTEN. I can taste fear in the air I sense there would be horror if I get any closer…!

By: Jessica fairhurst

Jessica fairhurst — Mon, 12 Oct 2015 19:03:19 +0000

I heard all the dusty windows creaking as I approached the the spooky mansion .I suddenly saw a flicker of light I knew someone was in that house but then the door opened andI could hear blood being slurped!

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Mon, 12 Oct 2015 07:32:49 +0000

Lots of interesting vocabulary here Matthew! 1GT

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Mon, 12 Oct 2015 07:31:40 +0000

Good use of a 2A sentence, just be careful your setting description doesn’t turn into a story!

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Mon, 12 Oct 2015 07:30:42 +0000

Fantastic setting description Lottie! You’ve used lots of the features to make it very imaginative! 1GT

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Mon, 12 Oct 2015 07:29:51 +0000

Good use of our word of the week McCauley! 1GT!

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Mon, 12 Oct 2015 07:29:18 +0000

Great use of personification Nithu! 1GT

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Mon, 12 Oct 2015 07:27:42 +0000

Fantastic use of an emotion sentence and personification Ethan! 1GT

By: Mr Lyons

Mr Lyons — Mon, 12 Oct 2015 07:27:10 +0000

A very in-depth setting description Hana. Good use of similes! 1GT